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tenshi_no_hanabira_zome [2013/06/01 22:49]
tenshi_no_hanabira_zome [2018/05/22 17:15] (current)
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 +===== A Kiss for the Petals - Dyed with an Angel'​s Petals =====
 +その花びらにくちづけを 天使の花びら染め
  
 +Yuri game from Fuguriya. //Tenshi no Hanabira Zome// (or //Dyed with an Angel'​s Petals//) is the 8th game in //A Kiss for the Petals// series, and the first Eris x Shizuku story. See also //​[[http://​dniknu.wordpress.com/​2011/​09/​08/​first-review-sono-hanabira-ni-kuchizuke-o-tenshi-no-hanabira-zome/​|Unkind'​s review]]//. See [[http://​listlessink.wordpress.com/​sono-hanabira-ni-kuchizuke-wo-series/​|Listless Ink blog]] for an overview of the entire franchise. See [[http://​petalsgarden.axypb.net/​|Petals'​ Garden]] for English patches of previous SonoHana games.
 +
 +**Translated script in bold.** Place the translation on the same line with original Japanese, right after the = (no space).
 +
 +**[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s001]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s002]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s003]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s004]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s005]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s006]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s007]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s008]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s009]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s010]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s011]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s012]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s013]]
 +((Translated by Hyarare))
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s014]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s015]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s016]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s017]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s018]]**
 +((Translated by DeltaCake))
 +
 +TLC'd by DeltaCake:
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s001]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s002]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s003]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s004]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s005]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s006]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s007]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s008]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s009]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s010]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s011]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s012]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s013]]
 +
 +TLC'd by @fkeroge:
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s004]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s014]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s015]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s016]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s017]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s018]]
 +
 +Edited by Rika-chama:
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s001]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s002]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s003]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s004]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s005]]
 +
 +Edited by Rika-chama Post-patch:
 +
 +
 +QCed by AXYPB:
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s001]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s002]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s003]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s004]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s005]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s006]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s007]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s008]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s009]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s010]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s011]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s012]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s013]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s014]]
 +
 +QCed by Virus123:
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s001]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s002]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s003]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s004]]
 +
 +QCed by Virus123 Post-patch:
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s005]]
 +
 +TLC'd and edited by Saluki:
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s001]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s002]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s003]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s004]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s005]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s006]] ​
 +
 +Edited by @fkeroge:
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s001]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s002]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s003]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s004]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s005]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s006]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s007]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s008]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s009]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s010]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s011]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s012]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s013]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s014]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s015]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s016]]
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s017]]  ​
 +[[tenshi_no_hanabira_zome:​s018]]
 +
 +__//​**Project discussion: http://​nsfw.yuri-project.net/​res/​1665.html**//​__
 +
 +**Version 1 released 19 December 2012:** [[http://​petalsgarden.axypb.net/​2012/​12/​19/​sh8/​]]
 +
 +In the event that the wiki goes offline, AXYPB hosts his local copies of the script on Dropbox at https://​www.dropbox.com/​sh/​el63io35ah91owa/​_-5Wvpmtpv/​8
 +
 +=== Style Guide ===
 +Revised style guide:
 +  * Character name: Kirishima Shizuku (霧島雫) and Shitogi Eris (粢エリス).
 +  * The full name of the school is "St. Michael'​s School For Girls"​. The short name is "St. Michael'​s"​. ​
 +  * Use American English.
 +  * Avoid stock translations:​ "It can't be helped",​ "As expected of...",​ etc.
 +  * Spellings: "​okay",​ "all right",​ "?​!"​
 +  * Stuttering is recorded with repetitions of the first sound and follows capitalization of the stuttered word.
 +  * Six dots maximum in groups of three, except in long transitions.
 +  * Use past tense to describe actions and present tense to state facts, thoughts, or feelings.
 +  * Use second person narration as little as possible.
 +  * ― for interruption or truncation.
 +  * ~ or extra letters for extension.
 +  * Spaces follow ellipses ... unless they are followed by punctuation.
 +  * Ignore all of the above for vocalizations.
 +  * The ★ represent heart symbols in the text. In game, a graphic is used to display them, so ArcTool uses the ★ as a marker to insert that graphic in the translation.
 +
 +=== Comments ===
 +Lines that do not include an offset will be ignored by ArcTool. You can leave comments in the scripts to ask for clarification. Precede comments with a # to make them stand out.